You are a very clever lady. In so few words? You've managed to capture the whole cycle of creation so succinctly. Life to death and vice versa is a natural transition...you have written about it so well. I am impressed.
Liz, this was just incredible! I really love Diamantes and what the members of our club have been writing.. Yours has been truly amazing..the words you pick are so beyond me and you shock me every time. As for me, I'd pick simpler words to describe death and life...its awesome to read your unique words that arent often in poems!