Not yours Anymore
by Mask of Pain Nov 9, 2010
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You said you loved me. But who do you think you are to turn your back on me, to leave me crying, dying for your love. You use to hold me tight but now it's not even a kiss goodnight. I'm not going to be your shadow anymore. I'm taking one step out the door. |
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12 years ago
by Brittany C
I liked it. Good wording and flow.
Try breaking up like I showed in the comments I left on 2 of your other poems. Other then that it was great.
gave 5/5
