Comments : The Falling Lady

  • 7 years ago

    by Ingrid de Klerck

    Wow, I am truly impressed....what a story, and how beautifully written!

    Jaggedly lain the leather belt around her slim waist,
    Beneath her bleeding heart, contused lungs incased.

    ^^

    These lines really spoke to me..

    Hats off for you, you did so well!

    5/5 Ingrid

  • 7 years ago

    by Meena Krish

    You gave the star character as well as emotions..I could visualize the whole thing as if a woman is falling down to her death. Indeed it is well written like a story that unfolds with emotion..good job and congrats on the win :)

  • 7 years ago

    by Angie

    Congrats on the win... you've painted an amazing picture with your words. A very unique write, well done Keleena!

  • 7 years ago

    by PinkyPrincess

    Wow... this poem is so touching... You told a story that really engaged me as the reader... I love the imagery you've created. Congratulations on the win! Well done! :)