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by Ingrid de Klerck
Wow, I am truly impressed....what a story, and how beautifully written!
Jaggedly lain the leather belt around her slim waist,
Beneath her bleeding heart, contused lungs incased.
These lines really spoke to me..
Hats off for you, you did so well!
by Meena Krish
You gave the star character as well as emotions..I could visualize the whole thing as if a woman is falling down to her death. Indeed it is well written like a story that unfolds with emotion..good job and congrats on the win :)
Congrats on the win... you've painted an amazing picture with your words. A very unique write, well done Keleena!
Wow... this poem is so touching... You told a story that really engaged me as the reader... I love the imagery you've created. Congratulations on the win! Well done! :)