Thank you very much for a wonderful fun collab. You're extremely talented and I be honored to collab at anytime
Hugs girl

Very nice work to the two of you. The first few verses are on the darker side but the last two are filled with hope of a better world. The flow is good and your styles on this meshed very well. Good job.

What a great poem and seeing that it is a collaboration is even more unique. The transition from writer to write is very good and there were many emotions that one gets while reading this. The simple word choice and the over all simplicity made this poem very enjoyable. The imagery also in parts of this poem were nice as it painted a picture for the reader to see while reading. Great job and keep writing.

Well, this certainly has an uplifting end:)

You two indeed mesh well, I had trouble seeing TJ in here, ha ha and I know him realllllly well.

A light warm and vibrant light
slowly glows in the distant sky
Could it be hope and faith
Growing and over coming hate.

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I like this part best, it gave me an image of a sun rising in beautiful hues of tangerine:)

Well done to the both of you,

5/5 Ingrid