Amazingly catchy. A poem that's worth a 100 read.
Great wording, admirable word choice.
you need to add some commas, capitalize the (i)s
and take off some (ands) but if you think it's needless then COOL. For I am in love with the poem whether you change these or keep them.
I would like to see it on the front page..so I wish you good luck.

a very creative piece, harmonic ..i was taken by your words and lines. and i was wanting to Relate and actually I did relate..

a very clever poem
5/5 d

Another great one