Wording of this is what women want to hear and believe. That there is one special guy that won't mess with their heads or play with their hearts. So many play that game and I guess us girls do too.
Though worded differently, this was really a beautiful love poem.

OMG....
This poem no bet can have a different structure but leave me out of that..I have tears and my whole senses are MOVED..I so love this poem

very strong David..very strong FEELINGS..
urging..moving..perfect!!
so MNUCH damn love in this piece..so much emotions..SAD..hard
yet SWEET to keep on wanting to prove for someone how much U want to be their happiness..and show them the real bliss as sooon as they give u trust..

brilliant emotions
5/5