You are a very wise lady Lizzie!
I love your mind, your words, your talent..your poems and attitude !
an excellent writing!
No matter what the end results may be,
no matter how bad things have turned,
how you come out of it
depends on what you learned
^^^that hits home for me..
what a philosopher.
however I believe if you add some more colors and less narration for this piece, it would leave a huger effect. Like if you can make these amazing messages a bit more lyrical..
Just these suggestions for this piece..