Comments : The Ending to a New Beginning

  • 6 years ago

    by Rania Moallem

    You are a very wise lady Lizzie!
    I love your mind, your words, your talent..your poems and attitude !
    an excellent writing!

    No matter what the end results may be,
    no matter how bad things have turned,
    how you come out of it
    depends on what you learned

    ^^^that hits home for me..
    what a philosopher.

    however I believe if you add some more colors and less narration for this piece, it would leave a huger effect. Like if you can make these amazing messages a bit more lyrical..
    Just these suggestions for this piece..
    5/5