Comments : Come, Sweet Death

  • 7 years ago

    by The Queen

    I loved how the positivity evolved within this piece and the good part was when you ended it optimistically. :) You are good at effective line formation and meter.

    Flawless piece :)

  • 7 years ago

    by Kiko

    I've read this several times now, and each time, I grasp a little more of its meaning.

    It is a very deep and mysterious write, where love and death intermingle and consume each other in a dreamy, shadowy world, located somewhere in that fascinating mind of yours. :)

  • 7 years ago

    by Ingrid de Klerck

    This is magical, Brianna. I remember the first time you showed me, I went like ahh, what did she do with the words?. It is like they dance to a rhythm only you know. Little genius:)

    5/5 Ingrid