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by The Princess Mar 4, 2011
Life, society /
If I flatten my lips,
against your forehead
would you open to us
one massive claw?
would you cradle
in your palm?
by Acoustic Odyssey
I have to say that I adore your metaphors you've used, they create a powerful yet humbling atmosphere. I have but on more word for this, beautiful.
Have a nice day :)
I love all of your poetry.
the ones i read anyways.
this poem in by far my favorite though.
I dont know why, it just is.
dont stop writing, you have some real potential.
And it would be greatly appriciated if you could comment and rate one of my poems.
by Sungrl And Mrs Whatsit
A touching and nearly painful piece to read..
....to whom are you speaking, my Dear..?....
Please, do be oh so careful..
by Rachel RTVW
A short but thought provoking piece. Nor what volumes this speaks. I too hope your prayers will be answered and that you and your family will remain safe.
This poem is short on words, but heavy in meaning and symbolism.
I truly enjoyed it and hope your prayers will be answered.