Comments : Are You Willing to Climb This Wall

  • 7 years ago

    by Rania Moallem

    Excellent word choice, you sure do have the talent.
    I loved the piece, and i love the title, the only thing i think you must edit is the unstable upper and lowercase..u dont need to capitalize all these 1st letters of each new line, i think u are using miscrosoft word to write down ur poems, because they change the words to upper case lol..anyway thats not a big deal, just plays with the flow.

    I surely enjoyed reading this and the one before it
    well done.

  • 6 years ago

    by v

    My sentiments exactly! Your words captures perfectly, the conflict my heart is undergoing.