Excellent word choice, you sure do have the talent.
I loved the piece, and i love the title, the only thing i think you must edit is the unstable upper and lowercase..u dont need to capitalize all these 1st letters of each new line, i think u are using miscrosoft word to write down ur poems, because they change the words to upper case lol..anyway thats not a big deal, just plays with the flow.
I surely enjoyed reading this and the one before it
6 years ago
My sentiments exactly! Your words captures perfectly, the conflict my heart is undergoing.