Comments : Buried

  • 7 years ago

    by Cindy

    This is such a powerful piece. Perfect for what is happening in the world right now.

    Anoynmous innocent stars
    Twinkling with shame
    Whilst gazing upon us
    Killing ourselves for fame

    How sad and heartbreaking what some will do to get noticed and have power over others.

    Greed for power
    With injected lust
    Rage embracing crime
    Bury future to dust

    Killing the future for the next generations. Makes you cry thinking about all that is happening.

    Excellent job on this one yaar.
    Love Cindy

  • 7 years ago

    by Sylvia

    Nitin, I would never have guessed you wrote this when reading the contest poems. To me it is a different style than you normally use. Your words do speak of the lifestyle of many people today especially those hungry for fame and power and material goods.

  • 7 years ago

    by Lady Nik

    Nitin :] this was amazing. The first few lines really blew me away. The imagery in this piece was dark in away but very clever. I loved the diction as well. A very nice read from you dear :] -Nik

  • 7 years ago

    by Sourav

    So well written. First line sets the tone of the poem nicely. Very relevant to our society and a nice way to describe it.

  • 7 years ago

    by Meena Krish

    Each of the stanza you have written portrays
    about the things that is taking over this world,
    greed, power and lust..its like destroying everything that is innocent! An excellent write!