Faking happiness

Very nicely written - short and to the point.
Nice use of metaphor and rhyme.
Great flow.
I can definitely relate - though who wouldnt?!
But we must also remember to show our true emotions even if it raises unwanted questions or attention. In the long run, talking it out actually can help and its better to have sorted things out asap then try to deal with it on out own only to endure the pain and tears for longer..
Beautifully written. 5/5

I can really relate to this, it's a very strong poem in my eyes. Very well written it will go in my favorites (:

Its true so many cn relate to this, nicely written, i really like the end. 5/5.
xkimx

Such a deep and emotional write...
Can relate so much