Comments : Fragile Book

  • 12 years ago

    by PinkyPrincess

    I enjoyed this poem a lot. I like the raw emotions you portrayed through describing the fragile book of life, and I loved the imagery and your word choice. I liked the beginning of the poem the most, though I do enjoy happy endings :)

  • 12 years ago

    by Hallucinostic

    Wow, this poem you got here, this is beautiful. the rhymes, every word, the beginning, middle, the end, filled with emotions, wow. All in all this is beautiful. amazing Connie, amazing. :D

  • 12 years ago

    by Jackie

    What a lovely poem, very well written. 5/5

  • 12 years ago

    by Faithless

    I love how your opening stanza, it just give the readers the mental image of an old book that been taken off, a dusty shelf. The content in the book makes you reminisce the time when you pen down your thoughts; thinking how pure your emotions we back then. Anyway it certainly was delightful to read and you added a great flow to it by writing a rhyme poetry. The ending was just lovely of how love is infinite, just like the circle.

  • 12 years ago

    by The Po whet

    I can say you took your time in creating this wonderful piece,it's amazing,luv your work.

  • 12 years ago

    by Jon914

    First 2 paragraphs spoke to me the most

  • 12 years ago

    by A lonely soul

    Very beautiful. Portrayal of life's moments as a book of life moments of friendship and love.
    A touching ending stanza:

    Friendships built with ardor
    the circle never fades
    once you are embraced in love
    it will always be displayed

  • 12 years ago

    by average thoughts

    I just loved every single stanza..of this poem ..excellent..again

  • 12 years ago

    by Exostosis

    Such a mature piece. Looking at life like pages of a book. Life is just as fragile. Beautiful.

  • 12 years ago

    by Tara Kay

    Connie, I cannot believe I never read this before.
    I was totally and completely astounded by the words, and the flow and rhyme was like so damn perfect its unreal.
    OMG I love this, it's just so sweet and so sad at the same time, yet just speaks from the heart and shows your love for your friends well.

    OMG I dunno what else to say, the energy was soft, serene, and gentle.
    I love it!!!!
    Mwah

    Love
    Tara