Comments : Evolving Environment

  • 7 years ago

    by BlueJay

    Wow!! I love this!! You have done a magnificent job!!

  • 7 years ago

    by Cinnamonspice

    I have to add this to my favorite, not only did I like the message but it was written with intelligence .

  • 7 years ago

    by TJ Arizona Eagle

    The world needs to wake up or what we have will soon fade away maybe slowly or maybe in a blaze of sadness. Good write.

  • 7 years ago

    by Liliana

    Tis poem is truly amazing great job 5/5

  • 6 years ago

    by The Queen

    It's true, environment keeps evolving and it only makes sense that human will keep evolving , too, resulting to some unavoidable environmental impacts. The message behind this piece was sent successfully while the ambiguity of the poem's ending, however, made it more complex. The simple words and perfect rhyme scheme within this piece has enabled to achieve its easy flow, which added to the tranquility of this piece.