First off, hun, I think you''d better say "" strip me off etc."" because you are using present tense, and not past tense.
I love what you have written, you have written down very precisely why we are innocent, even if we commit '' crimes'' and that we are all equal, even when we are not the same. We are all cells of His body, sweetheart, if only people would truly know this, how different this world would be. We would no longer want to kill our brothers..because we ARE all brothers, all people on this earth.
I reread it just now, and I think it's really clever how you covered all bases"skin, wealth, religion, ranks, all factors that devide people, make some feel superiors and others like second class citizins, while they are not!
Proud to be your friend:)
A huge hug and hope this wins, it deserves to be on the front page, it even should be on every front page of every newspaper in this world!
Beautiful poem Azzza, I'm surprised both to see you writing again and at the same time, impressed with its perfect flow, precise word choice and deep imagery that touched emotions beyond the rational mind.
I don't know how I missed this poem, I am quit vigilant in checking for your work.
You're such a good poet, and this was so full of wisdom and beauty. I have no votes left but you can bet I will vote for it come next week.
Breathtakingly awesome my friend
6 years ago
Very inspirational and full of so much wisdom. Definitely a poem everyone should get their hands on and take to heart.
One quick thing:
"and no longer will I be judge"
judge should be judged, yeah? :) Great write!
6 years ago
A beautiful poem. I often feel that it's so hard to simply be, when there are people who will judge you for no matter what you do or say. 5/5