I loved this!
its going on my favourate's

the flow and rythm was good, i found myself relating to it.

Smiles come
To ease the pain
But you can't save a person
Who's never been sane

was my fav part

please keep writing
5/5

Relates to me when I thought I could never be saved a couple of years ago, and the odd time I still feel that way. When the ones that saved me where taken away. I was lucky, in some cases, probably most cases, that depression never goes away. I'm hardly broken from back then. I new bat has hit me recently and sometimes I feel shattered, but as ost as I feel about it, things will most likely turn away. You are are great writer Brooklyn