Comments : Black&Blue

  • 6 years ago

    by Something Diabolical

    I loved this!
    its going on my favourate's

    the flow and rythm was good, i found myself relating to it.

    Smiles come
    To ease the pain
    But you can't save a person
    Who's never been sane

    was my fav part

    please keep writing

  • 6 years ago

    by CathyButterflyJC

    Relates to me when I thought I could never be saved a couple of years ago, and the odd time I still feel that way. When the ones that saved me where taken away. I was lucky, in some cases, probably most cases, that depression never goes away. I'm hardly broken from back then. I new bat has hit me recently and sometimes I feel shattered, but as ost as I feel about it, things will most likely turn away. You are are great writer Brooklyn