Comments : Peace for the Fighter

  • 6 years ago

    by Meme

    This is really amazing Larry, I so loved the openning line, it was just capturing. I specially liked this verse:
    Looking down from the top
    of a house on the hill
    haunted by your scorn;
    took decades to let go.
    ^^
    its always so hard to let go, sometimes it feels impossible.

    Loved it so much.

  • 6 years ago

    by Cinnamonspice

    The last line was awe inspiring, we often dwell on the past, the injustices done to us by parental authority. I try to forget the abuse and
    remember that I am strength and courage.
    I loved this piece. It's going in my favorites so I can read it when times seem to be roughest

    Connie

  • 6 years ago

    by Beauty In The Breaking

    My fiance is a fighter, or retired fighter I should say, and this sounds so much like something he tells me when he's tired and emotional beat up with memories. Heartbreaking in a way to think of the story behind this.

  • 6 years ago

    by Innocent Fairy

    U already know what I think of this poem :) 5/5

  • 5 years ago

    by christopher

    First two stanzas good where you went after that i do not know good start second verse good what happend after that