Comments : My thoughts.

  • 6 years ago

    by GorqeousDisaster

    I had alot more, i just couldnt put my mind in to words just yet, ill be finishing it more here in a few

  • 6 years ago

    by Matthew Schut

    I want to properly function, with out
    being so fake.
    I want this to end...
    No matter what it takes.

    Wow, so much emotion through this poem! I really love these lines.... this piece is just amazing! 10/10!

  • 6 years ago

    by ReBecca

    This actually sounds alot like BPD (Borderline Personality Disorder) and the struggles of one suffering from it. It was very well written and left an imprint upon finishing. I enjoyed reading this.