Comments : You

  • 7 years ago

    by PinkyPrincess

    Wow! This poem is so beautiful! I loved reading every word - it was just such a delight to read. I loved the uniqueness of this poem, and the structure matched completely. I loved the metaphors and comparisons you've made - how you began with comparing 'you' to winter, and then this stanza blew me away:

    If I could drink in the vanilla
    of your neck, I would.
    If I could watch the snowy sparkles
    in your eyes, I would.
    And kiss the frost from your lips,

    --- I love itttt!!! 5/5

  • 7 years ago

    by The Poet Behind The Poems

    Beautiful you have a way with words such a good talent 5/5 :D

  • 7 years ago

    by Innocent Fairy

    Wow wow and wow :) so good i have no words to explain but i loved it and a fantastic read :) 10/10 jsut lovely

  • 7 years ago

    by Mel

    Oh wow, thank you all so much.

    I actually wrote this for my on and off boyfriend, he hates having pale skin, and has a low self esteem.. I think he's gorgeous.

  • 6 years ago

    by Autuumnbree

    Excellent, short but very intense, full of love and emotions. I

  • 6 years ago

    by Dark Secrets

    This poem is simple, sensual and beautifully worded... I could taste your emotions and live the moment. Well written, it deserves the win :)

  • 6 years ago

    by Marcus blake

    Amazing ^__^ thats a love poem for you