Comments : Arise Poet

  • 6 years ago

    by Jenni

    I apologise if this ends up being a wall of texts because I just blabber a lot as it is, but when I read things like these it gets even worse. So yea I am sorry if this will end up a bit longer than it maybe should.

    Okay well you told me how this was for me, but it's actually quite tough to believe because your words are so much better than I'll ever be, but it definately made me feel good about myself. I seriously feel honored and I am more than grateful that you wrote this for me. I am definately surprised.

    Now I'll look at this with a critics point of view: It's perfect! :P
    I seriously think so though because I like your choice of words and it flows really well too. I also liked the use of the imperative here. Well I liked everything.

    Thanks so so so so so so much. :)

  • 6 years ago

    by Exostosis

    A very nice piece. Hope Jenni is happy with this, although the comment above by her says it all. Congrats Jenni, you deserve this. And TJ is simply an awesome guy. Very humble.

  • 6 years ago

    by Cinnamonspice

    What a nice read TJ, it was inspiring, beautiful , and for one of the nicest ppl on the site. You penned her talents with style and grace. You're a wonderful person for encouraging all of us.

    Connie

  • 6 years ago

    by Innocent Fairy

    A great tribute to a friend and i love love loved it and i think everything was perfect :) just amazing and wonderful,,,kinda felt life i was imagining and taken to the places thought of in the poem and maybe created some of my own :) fantastic and well great terrific :) :) 5/5 always :0)

    my fav parts:
    Awake the sleeping artisan
    bedding deep within your core..

    Allow the world to view
    your magical spiraling colors

    an empty void, bringing
    to life wonders yet untold.

    take me to far off places
    fill my heart with sadness
    and romance. Lead me to
    the land of awe.

    BUT THE ENTIRE POEM WAS MAGNIFICIENT :) :) :)

  • 6 years ago

    by Sylvia

    Beautiful words of encouragement for a fellow writer. You are a friend that brings out the best in us all and I am honored to call you my friend. You had joked that you had lost your poetic touch but I beg to differ, it is there and better than ever. This was a joy to read.

  • 6 years ago

    by Chevalier des Fleurs

    Wow, very well written, It is full of beautiful imagery and you executed each sentence with the utmost vivid and creative structure I have seen in a long while. Awesome work. Thank you for the comment on mine. 5/5

  • 6 years ago

    by nourayasmine

    Being Jennifer's best friend...
    I must thank you, TJ.

    I am in love with both the poem and with the one who wrote it, you are such a nice person. Oh and yes with Jenni haha though I feel a bit jealous (Grrr) but well, I can forgive, I have a big heart. : P

    Seriously this poem was great! Liked it sooo much, omg, if I were Jenni, I'd give you a hug for this, right away, haha.

    Good job. ; D

  • 6 years ago

    by Ingrid de Klerck

    Rise up and create magnificent
    things that are now snoozing in
    shadows

    ^^
    In essence that is what being an artist is all about: to create things based on an idea or a feeling.

    What a nice gesture to write your friend such a lovely tribute, I am sure she appreciates it greatly:)

    5/5 Ingrid

  • 6 years ago

    by Lostlove1

    This is really Good, simply beautiful actually. You are a fantastic writer T.J. It is a pleasure always to read you.

  • 6 years ago

    by Lonely Rider

    Words can do magic ... as yours does everytime, a beautiful write and a lovely dedication.

  • 6 years ago

    by Decayed

    I envy Jenni :)

    This was a great tribute to her.. XD

  • 6 years ago

    by PinkyPrincess

    Wow... I absolutely love this poem! I'm in awe! I loved the meaning and the story of this poem... I love how you are talking to yourself, and possibly other people, to bring out the poets in them... So lovely! And your word choice was perfect... It made me inspired and proud to be a poet! And I think so sweet that you wrote this for Jenni, I would be flattered! Amazing poem! =)

  • 6 years ago

    by Karan

    You are one of a kind bro... this poem is beautifully written... amazing bro amazing... keep up the great work...:)

  • 6 years ago

    by Liliana

    Wow I'm sure Jenni loved this.

    Allow the world to view
    your magical spiraling colors

    this is just magical, great poem 5/5

  • 6 years ago

    by Lioness

    What a beautiful poem
    Jenni must be so happy and honored that this poem was written about her, especially a poem which expresses such compliment

    Light the lamp of imagination
    as your pen glides across
    an empty void, bringing
    to life wonders yet untold

    How amazing are these words flown

    I love this poem

    x
    The first two stanzas are my favorite

  • Very sweet piece of writing, TJ.

    5/5

    -Heather