I apologise if this ends up being a wall of texts because I just blabber a lot as it is, but when I read things like these it gets even worse. So yea I am sorry if this will end up a bit longer than it maybe should.
Okay well you told me how this was for me, but it's actually quite tough to believe because your words are so much better than I'll ever be, but it definately made me feel good about myself. I seriously feel honored and I am more than grateful that you wrote this for me. I am definately surprised.
Now I'll look at this with a critics point of view: It's perfect! :P
I seriously think so though because I like your choice of words and it flows really well too. I also liked the use of the imperative here. Well I liked everything.
A great tribute to a friend and i love love loved it and i think everything was perfect :) just amazing and wonderful,,,kinda felt life i was imagining and taken to the places thought of in the poem and maybe created some of my own :) fantastic and well great terrific :) :) 5/5 always :0)
my fav parts:
Awake the sleeping artisan
bedding deep within your core..
Allow the world to view
your magical spiraling colors
an empty void, bringing
to life wonders yet untold.
take me to far off places
fill my heart with sadness
and romance. Lead me to
the land of awe.
Beautiful words of encouragement for a fellow writer. You are a friend that brings out the best in us all and I am honored to call you my friend. You had joked that you had lost your poetic touch but I beg to differ, it is there and better than ever. This was a joy to read.
7 years ago
by Chevalier des Fleurs
Wow, very well written, It is full of beautiful imagery and you executed each sentence with the utmost vivid and creative structure I have seen in a long while. Awesome work. Thank you for the comment on mine. 5/5
Being Jennifer's best friend...
I must thank you, TJ.
I am in love with both the poem and with the one who wrote it, you are such a nice person. Oh and yes with Jenni haha though I feel a bit jealous (Grrr) but well, I can forgive, I have a big heart. : P
Seriously this poem was great! Liked it sooo much, omg, if I were Jenni, I'd give you a hug for this, right away, haha.
Wow... I absolutely love this poem! I'm in awe! I loved the meaning and the story of this poem... I love how you are talking to yourself, and possibly other people, to bring out the poets in them... So lovely! And your word choice was perfect... It made me inspired and proud to be a poet! And I think so sweet that you wrote this for Jenni, I would be flattered! Amazing poem! =)