Our second chance

by The Poet Behind The Poems   Oct 17, 2011


How did I think I could walk down this street?
With out you by my side, feeling incomplete
The first time we tried I let it shatter like glass
Let's put these pieces together and forget about the past

I promise to love you forever and a day
To keep your sky blue and never turn grey
I promise to be there and always be true
I'd dive in the deepest ocean just to be with you

I want to be the gravity that keeps you on earth
I can't wait for our wedding and Childs birth
The sacred vows that we will share together
Ill hold you in my arms and last forever.

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  • 12 years ago

    by believeinlove87

    Amazing poem :)

    Love pours out of this poem, the love you feel for her. How you would do anything to be with her. Saying that the pain you feel without her kills you.
    I feel this way about guy.
    Flawless piece<3
    5/5

  • 12 years ago

    by Decayed

    The Rhyming scheme is what made me love the poem.
    It flowed smoothly.

  • 12 years ago

    by TJ Arizona Eagle

    Rhyme and flow was awesome Tony.
    Your words were flowers that bloomed into the beauty of emotions
    Excellent

  • 12 years ago

    by Liliana

    I promise to love you forever and a day
    To keep your sky blue and never turn grey
    I promise to be there and always be true
    I'd dive in the deepest ocean just to be with you

    aww this is so amazing, and I loved the rhymes so 5/5

  • 12 years ago

    by Jenni

    Poems like these is what I missed when you weren't around because I can literally feel the love in your words. The fact that this poem rhymes so naturally and flows smoothly underline the context very well. If it wasn't like that and was rather choppy, it'd be harder to believe your words too. I have to admit that some comparisons weren't that original, but most of the time they were.
    Overall you penned a heartfelt and touching poem.

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