Comments : Let me in

  • 7 years ago

    by Jenna Bella Oldridge

    Another long poem that is so worth the read. Very raw and very emotional. You have a well penned piece here.


  • 7 years ago

    by Jessica

    His Is So Long But It Worked Out Perfectly!
    Your Word Choice Is Amazing.
    Awesome Job!

  • 7 years ago

    by Burning Angel

    This was so good, i enjoyed reading this and i really liked the flow of it.. it had alot of emotion!!

  • 7 years ago

    by Lee

    Universally reaches out to so many people, and fits into how everyone feels at one point or another 5/5

  • 7 years ago

    by Bridgette

    Wow I absolutly love this poem. I am speechless have you tried publishing these? If not you should. Love Bridgette

  • 7 years ago

    by L

    This is great, somehow encouraging and uplifting. :)

  • 7 years ago

    by average thoughts

    Long poem ,bt worth my read..
    Simple, yet so powerful..

    5 smileys..

  • 7 years ago

    by Lostlove1

    Long poetry absolutely overwhelms me but how odd yours doesn' that in itself says alot. This was so deep, again it pulled me in and refused to let me go until the very last word. Again, awesome.

  • 7 years ago

    by ChrisT

    You are my felicity, ms. felicity, your poem is heart breaking and revealing

  • 7 years ago

    by Wicked Ways

    Yess I love how you let your emotions just spill out on this poem, you could really tell that you went all out on this poem, writing it as it comes to your head and what you're feeling. . . .. . and I love the very last line "Let me in ,You do not have to face this alone"

    awesome poem you have written here once again I like your styles :)

  • 6 years ago

    by Randy East

    Another heart felt piece, You have a big heart, and I can see through this poem how much you love the people in your life. Writing poems like these I cant think of a better way to let them know how how much you care for them. Yes... another great write.