Comments : Show me how to: (Part I - Sad)

  • 7 years ago

    by Innocent Fairy

    Aw poor friend I hope you don't feel this way and I'm very sorry if you do and wish many smiles upon that frowning face :/
    Fantastic poem I loved it :) 5/5

  • 7 years ago

    by mandy

    I felt myself becoming more, and more claustrophobic as the poem went on. A very affective write. Strong emotions, vivid images. 5/5

    mandy :)

  • 7 years ago

    by BlueJay

    Wow. This is most definatly unique. The emotion is dead on well written, because the reader can feel how you say you feel. Yes, it is vivid, though I do not think vivid is a strong enough word to describe it. the style and flow are interesting and help give this poem some of its terrific tone. Overall, excellent job.

  • 7 years ago

    by Meena Krish

    "By a sweet sorceress who still stalks my soul"

    I really like this end for it leaves the reader with a question answers just a question, a wovdering thought...very well done!

  • 7 years ago

    by Ms Happiness

    ^^ I agree withMeena Krish, the ending is lovely:)
    Well written a 5/5 from me:)

  • 7 years ago

    by Cinnamonspice

    The write was electric, charged with emotions . Every word pulled the reader in. Showing us a taste of what lies beneath the written word.

  • 7 years ago

    by Boy

    This poem is the poem of the week. i like it. its an amazing poem that i read in this week. full of emotions. and so easy to understand. the flow is awesome. you are a great writer..

  • 7 years ago

    by Lioness

    I really liked this poem!

    It was well written and I feel that a lot of people including myself will connect with the poem as well as the poet.

    What I got from reading this poem was how heartbreaking losing love can be. How our pastlovers can make us feel numb and cold as well as trapped in an emotion of hell.

    They aren't with you anymore but somehow still control you. They've taken away your existence and reason for being.

    A deep emotional poem

    Loved it



  • 7 years ago

    by jody

    I really like this one x

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  • 6 years ago

    by Marine Wife 80

    Thank You for your kind words on my poem:) I will be posting more work up.