Comments : Sometimes I try

  • 6 years ago

    by Lost Soul 691

    You have captured the roller coaster of love ... for there is a fine line between it/crazy/and obsession where the heart is concerned. Reading it brought back a past longing, but at least this time it was just a warm thought for a memory. Nice work.

    • 5 years ago

      by Beauty In The Breaking

      Thank you so very much. Yes there is indeed a very fine line that is all to easy to cross. The heart indeed makes little sense in it's desires and feelings.

  • 6 years ago

    by Innocent Fairy

    Wow amazing and beautiful I love love loved it and dreamy,,,a fantastic write wonderfully done a splendid job,,all of it's perfect and so sooo so romantic :) 10/10