This poem is a hard one to say i love this, to. The loss of a child is so mind blowing, so grief strickening i cannot begin to imagine nor would i try to put into words any form of, i'm sorry, because it just doesnt begin to cover it. You convey your poem in a way that makes the reader feel pain as well, the mere imagery and feeling is enough to make this poem both the best i've read in content as well as the saddest. I express my most heart felt condolences to any parent that ever loses a child and its my sincerest hope that in some way at some point you find peace once more.

Strong poem.Take care.

Thank you very much for your feedback. This experience was truly hard, but from it i have grown strong! Im glad you enjoyed my peice and got the feeling all in one, i write only on truth and my personal experience's and that's what connects with my readers, because not only do they know that i have wrote it, they get to feel and amagine the truth in my surrounding and daily life.