Comments : Politico

  • 6 years ago

    by Sylvia

    I think you captured the thoughts of a politician and how they must feel with the power they receive when elected. They forget how and who elected them.

  • 6 years ago

    by Cinnamonspice

    This was absolutely brilliant. The contradicting lines are right on. I listen to campaigns and think we the ppl are really stupid to believe 99% of what is said, so we vote on personality. I won't go into my political views , no one wants to hear them but wow you nailed it.
    I loved this write. Going in favorites

    Connie

  • 6 years ago

    by Sherry Lynn

    I must say that you have done a wonderful job. Penning this piece on politicians is absolutely brilliant.
    You have captured the emotions of the people and painted such a vivid array of truthfulness.

  • 6 years ago

    by TJ Arizona Eagle

    Nitin my man what an awesome write. You speak for the people in this, just how we feel about how they talk out the side of their mouths. Excellent bro

  • 6 years ago

    by Exostosis

    I am sword's peace
    I am gunshot's silence
    With my holy thoughts
    I worship violence

    I like the contradiction used to describe the swamp that is politics. Swords peace, and gunshot's silence, the play on words is amusing.
    The thoughts holy, worshiping violence is pretty much the truth.

    Bouncing crystal ball
    Won't change my fate
    Chosen by common man
    With command to hate

    This stanza clearly states how the citizens have elected the political demon, unaware of his intentions.

    I deceive with honesty
    I abide law of sins
    Within my sacred blood
    I breathe for needles & pins

    ^
    This stanza is quite the slap on the face. I have nothing to say about this stanza, it is self explained and needs no elaboration.

    I deceive with honesty - Such simplicity, yet it reflects the horror perfectly.

    Ruling weak souls
    Living free in cages
    Freedom vanished with faith
    Power shines for ages

    ^ Ruling weak souls - does justify the circumstances created once the politicians are elected. People are resilient by force.

    Living free in cages - I interpret this line in two ways. One - Politicians living freely within the boundaries/cage of politics and breaking all the rules and laws with no fear. Two - People are like the animals in the zoo, unknowingly carrying an illusion that, they are residing free, even though they are free only within the cages they are confined to.

    Freedom vanishing with faith - merely states that the faith entrusted upon our chosen electives backfires once the power is lost to those who have won the election and will soon deprive us of rightful democracy.

    Long live corruption, hehe :P

    Very well written Nitin, must say you are one hell of a poet, speaking boldly into the face of the bad.

  • 6 years ago

    by Meena Krish

    Politicians all around are the same, they give out promises but never live up to them. Each verse you have penned, paints a perfect picture of a corrupt and deceiving politician. Excellent write!

  • 5 years ago

    by Jyoti Rawat

    Hye

    finally u submit this.

    this is ur best one.

  • 5 years ago

    by ronel mccarthy

    Excellent !great contrasts

  • 5 years ago

    by PinkyPrincess

    Wow this poem was amazing. I really felt it, and love how you wrote it. Your words were so powerful and you created brilliant imagery. I love the contradictions in your metaphors...

    "I deceive with honesty
    I abide law of sins
    Within my sacred blood
    I breathe for needles & pins"

    Very well-written! Great job!