Without You

by ilovered   Nov 21, 2011


Every day is like hell without you
The sun does not brighten up my day when we're apart
The moon does not give me light when I'm alone at night
Even the stars are not sparkling tonight
I don't know why all the things became strange when you left me behind

I feel so weak every time I wake up in the morning without you
You are like the bone in my body that gives support and makes me strong
My brain is preoccupied by our sweet memories we shared
My heart starts to beat so fast and it's like it will explode like a bomb
Every second, every minute I'm missing you

When I go to places that we had been before,
I remember you
It reminds our sweet memoirs and laughter
I heard your voice whispering in my ear,
And I thought it was really you but i was wrong
Then my tears start to fall,
realizing you're gone in my life.

Thank you for reading my poem..if you have any suggestion or comment please let me know to help me to improve my writings:)

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  • 12 years ago

    by Lioness

    Hey,

    As I said in the PM I really enjoyed reading this lovely poem full of emotion and heartache.

    I could understand your emotions and love for this person was obviously very deep

    x well done

  • 12 years ago

    by ilovered

    Yes that's true and i tried my best to put it back same like before but its useless..second time around is not healthy anymore especially if u don't trust each other again..doubts and jealousy will ruin everything

  • 12 years ago

    by ilovered

    Thank you for the comment..actually this poem was really based on my experience coz my bf and i broke up 5 days ago..so im trying to divert my emotions to something productive...

  • 12 years ago

    by Lofallenve

    This is beautiful, the emotions behind it are so strong. <3
    5/5

  • 12 years ago

    by Lofallenve

    This is beautiful, the emotions behind it are so strong. <3
    5/5

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