Just dont be fooled by the way I look, cause deep inside is something different << thats what I got from this poem. WOW !! I loved it so much Sara, your poems just hit me like a storm, you are getting betterand better with every poem you write ..
Wow!! This is probably one of the plainest of all the poems I've read. Even a layman can relate to this poem.
When one is stressed out and stretched beyond his limits, everything seems confusing. One cannot identify one thing from the other. And also if it has to do with emotional stress, it creates an internal bleeding that no one can see.
I love the medical sense of the poem. It flowed so well.
Wow.. this left me speechless
you are a great writer :] i love this piece!
5 years ago
This is a great piece. Its hard to express how you are feeling to anyone. Sadly many people are going through this. Its hard to talk to anyone you are feeling so down, and it is sad when one knows.