I like the idea of this poem. But it would be great if u fix some uncorrect spelling like ''hav'' it should be ''have'' n ''fragrsnce'' should be ''fragrance'' because its kinda disturbing. But overall, i like ur poem :)

Ahh! thiis is sad it made my heart sad D: maybe because I can relate to it. . . "To listen her voice are drying my veins;" I really liked this line in here. . . a voice is defintley a powerful factor. Good poem :)

Liked the emotions....how painful it is to recall on those beautiful memories and when you know i can never happen once again...... :)
nice work

U r js an amazing poet..blessed..
keep writing..
And fr dis poem..an anothr poem expressed well..

This is a very good poem :) its very specific in detail to what you feel in side :(

Wow! You have a way with words...