Kay,*

What an eerie little piece. You know I just read the version Bliss wrote for this prompt and I liked that you both had different ideas as to where to take this. While I say this is a dark it also has quite a bit of seduction especially with the word "nuzzle". Nuzzle is a word that portrays a sensitive feeling, and the neck is a delicate area, while of course it's the traditional area to be bitten by vampires or Dracula in mythology it's also a place for lovers to touch, that's why this poem becomes so much more.

The idea of only one being satisfied also works with the idea, sometimes one lover can be forgotten so to say, or rather one lover is greedy, these concepts also work with what you've written even if it wasn't your intention.

Especially fond of the word "impressions" it was a nice touch.

I think you've done an excellent job on short poetry lately, I'm definitely impressed by them.
-Mel