Comments : Rain Dance Inspiration

  • 12 years ago

    by TJ Arizona Eagle

    Natures percussion, tambourine dance
    feminine silhouette, upon a shadow wall trance,
    a naked, hushed whisper, glorifying youth
    blessed and proud of my middle aged truth....
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    I loved this stanza it held so much . The overall poem was great but wow thats a beautifully penned part

  • 12 years ago

    by Karla

    Beautiful piece sista as everything you write.

  • 12 years ago

    by Lioness

    Love the poem. The rhyming was great and flow was beautiful. I love the images. This reminded me of my childhood days when we used to do rain dances to make it rain.

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