Comments : Room for Rent (collab with Jenni)

  • 6 years ago

    by Jenni

    You're brilliant :) Thanks for doing this with me. Love you TJ! :) Muah

  • 6 years ago

    by Lioness

    What a lovely poem. I so enjoyed the images and I am glad to see you two have done a collab. So sweet!!! I love the metaphors of the room with two people being in it. A quite enjoyable poem to read!

    Well done you two!!! An awesome collab


  • 6 years ago

    by Maple Tree

    Oh I love this- Beautiful and creative piece by you two :-) well done!!!!

  • 6 years ago

    by Autuumnbree

    I think you two did a great job, I really like the part where you mention that no money is require to rent, because with true love money is not an issue. Good poem

  • 6 years ago

    by Ms Happiness

    WoooW what a great collab, as Autumnbree said I too like how the room is rented with love not money:)
    Perfectly written poem:)

  • 6 years ago

    by Tara Kay

    When I think of two people living together, I think of love, commitment, fortune, but it sort of shows that true love is priceless.

    You work well together, your styles compromise one another and you blend well, Its hard to make a poem flow so well when people have different styles, but this works

    I love it,
    great piece

  • 6 years ago

    by Decayed

    You finally did it :)
    Wohooo. that is a magnificent piece of total harmony. The title, the opening and the end are wow!!

  • 6 years ago

    by Karla

    Bowing to the King. Bravo my Lord.

  • 6 years ago

    by L

    "Should you apply, no money
    is required a simple promise
    to maintain it's delicate interior. "

    This one says it all! Love ask for nothing and it shows how much love there is by how much they take care of each other.

    I really enjoyed reading this poem.

  • 6 years ago

    by White Orchid

    I loved this! :) how you compared love with a home for rent, makes me think of an illustration about a house and to make the house look beautiful you decorate it and when a couple says kind words to the other and shows they love them by their actions each time they do so it is as if they're adding a piece of decor in the home and day by day it becomes something beautiful. Really nkice write, jyou also showed love is self sacrificing but it is a lovely thing, jthe comparison you made here was amazing! Nice write. :)

  • 6 years ago

    by Wicked Ways

    This is a really sweet poem, you both flowed together very nice, lovely written both of you, awesome poem guys

    the sweetness in this is just tear worthy, lol its so romantic, and i like the title and how you incorporated that into this lovely piece.