I loved this! :) how you compared love with a home for rent, makes me think of an illustration about a house and to make the house look beautiful you decorate it and when a couple says kind words to the other and shows they love them by their actions each time they do so it is as if they're adding a piece of decor in the home and day by day it becomes something beautiful. Really nkice write, jyou also showed love is self sacrificing but it is a lovely thing, jthe comparison you made here was amazing! Nice write. :)
6 years ago
by Wicked Ways
This is a really sweet poem, you both flowed together very nice, lovely written both of you, awesome poem guys
the sweetness in this is just tear worthy, lol its so romantic, and i like the title and how you incorporated that into this lovely piece.