Comments : Fading Memories.

  • 12 years ago

    by Rihanna

    :( tammi this is sad!

    The one you truly love is no longer by your side knowing that his the only one that keeps you on track.

    i know what you would want for me, and thats to stay on track.
    But its hard not having you here by my side,
    days like this i just want to curl up and die.
    I think i know what i have to do,
    let the memories fade, stop missing you.
    It's not easy especially when you were my life,

    ^^
    Wow what can I say bout this stanza
    You knowing that he whould Want u to stay on track
    But how when he isn't by your side and he was your life...

    This poem had rough emotions and the flow was really good, I loved how it rhymed perfect!

    Great write(:
    100/100

  • 12 years ago

    by Xanthe

    I love the emotion you put in this piece. This is probably my favorite poem of yours. Great write :)

    -X

  • 12 years ago

    by Paul Gondwe

    Its always sad to move on but you have to do it in order to start a new. Though it might be hard and sad but its necessary in your life. Well written.