Comments : Viking

  • 4 years ago

    by L

    I enjoyed reading the poem, but I have to be honest this part

    "despite
    stealing the life of a man
    whom I still love, if I can.
    "

    Got too repetitive that I kept repeating it in my head even after I finished reading, hehe.

    But the last stanza was my favorite one.

  • 4 years ago

    by Ms Happiness

    Gteat poem Timothy:)
    I too enjoyed reading it:)

  • 4 years ago

    by Karla

    I love the inclusion of Odin and the imagery in your piece.Always a pleasure to ead your pieces bro.

  • 4 years ago

    by Lioness

    Unique topic to write about - I love that.

    Loved the rhyming - felt so easy to read.

    Awesome poem.

    x