Comments : Altered Photographs

  • 5 years ago

    by believeinlove87

    You hang me -as standing
    still poser- in a gallery of
    altered photographs.
    -I love how you ended this with it.

    Reading this poem, made me think of those killers who take pictures of the people they kill, making it into photobooks.

    I love this poem!
    You can see it as you were reading it, and it made you want to see the end of the poem

    great job :)
    5/5

  • 5 years ago

    by Lady Nik

    Oooooh this was rich! Loved all the metaphors and how well they fit what you were saying. Very nice indeed. -Nik

  • 5 years ago

    by Lioness

    Woah I love this! I can see why you posted this under dark poems. There is that eerie feeling I got while reading this poem. The images themselves were dark but the feelings as well just freaked me out.

    The first stanza I immediately think of some kind of sicko perverted man who has taken pictures of you to fulfil his own fantasy. The idea that he has taken the photo of you and using it for his own sickness alters the photo. It takes away the true person you are, the sunny part instantly and the photo turns to darkness because of who has taken it.

    I love the poem, the vivid description the uniqueness of it. Awesome write hun!!!

    x

  • 5 years ago

    by Rania Moallem

    WOW this must be on of the greatest poems you;ve penned to date, the most free poem, nothing sounds forced, its soo geniune..its treasure, this is wat i most love in poetry, my fav style, and loved how you used those manipulative tools in editing photos...it was very well used, and in a very well thought of way.

    i dnt love it no, i think this is going to my favs, and right to the front page next week!

    hats off, brilliant wording memty

  • 5 years ago

    by Dagmar Wilson

    I love how you ended this poem. I liked it

  • 5 years ago

    by Wicked Ways

    Wow... I reallyliked this poem.... but it was the title that drew me in .....altered photographs....very nice title ffor this poem..it fit well....... it really sucks its like looking at everything you miss and everyything you ever wanted .......memories....I like this...it makes me imagine an empty gallery with pictures on te walls.....good poem

    :)

  • 5 years ago

    by Ruby Red Memories

    This poem is really unique and I was pulled in straight away. I liked the atmosphere of the piece and the creepy vibe of the poem. There are some sick people out there and this piece captures that.

    5/5

  • 5 years ago

    by Naughtymouse

    I really loved this poem, dark, open and honest kind of "laid out bare" the imagery was fantastic and the ending was just perfect, loved it! :-) x

  • 5 years ago

    by Chelsey

    OMG THIS IS SO UNIQUE! I LOVE THIS IDEA! Im so jealous I didn't think of it!!

    Seriously I loved that you took words that we do with photographs (crop, edit, effect) and used them in a different sense to describe what its like when a person tries to change you....dear God that is brilliant!

    Very very well done!!

  • 5 years ago

    by Hannah Lizette

    WOW. this is AMAZING. <3 seriously one of the best poems i've read on here, in my opinion... but also, I'm a photographer, so I guess that's why! Love the metaphors, omg... so brilliant. i wish i could vote a 10!