Comments : A Few Words

  • 11 years ago

    by Ms Happiness

    Awwwww thats really sweet:)
    I enjoyed reading it

  • 11 years ago

    by Wicked Ways

    Wow..i agree with emily, very sweet. . . dont u just love that, when you take a moment and then it becomes so overwhelming. . ..

    this is a lovely poem you have written here, nice work

  • 11 years ago

    by L

    This poem is so touching, I went awww when I finished reading the last words with every breath..

    I love when love comes from a love poem and this one is oozing it out.

  • 11 years ago

    by Heavy

    Awwwwwwhh!!! Andrea, this poem was adorable! I know the feeling, it's so cute - I like how it comes to show that nomatter how you rough you both can look in the mornings, you still find him so handsome! ^_^ Ha Ha - it's cute, I love reading poems about Love way beyond superficiality! It must be nice, having him around. :3

    Lover, I love falling in love with you
    every time I take a breath....

    That line -Sighs Smiling-

    This whole poem swelled my heart up like a balloon, It's really sweet, Maple

    Lovely

  • 11 years ago

    by Dagmar Wilson

    A few inspiring words can put a smile
    on someones face.

  • 11 years ago

    by nouriguess

    Damn it girl! please u gna cause me a heartattack

  • 11 years ago

    by Naughtymouse

    Love love love it! Such a heartfelt piece, only truth lay here :-) made me smile all the way through big loves x

  • 11 years ago

    by marlon lumangyao

    Love the five o'clock shadow is more powerful than the caffeine love POWERFUL!!!

  • 11 years ago

    by average thoughts

    This is d first time, i m readin any poem of uor..and i loved dis beauty of uor..
    Lines like grin tosses me ovr d edge,or i kept them hidden within last sip of coffee consumed..are so refreshin..