Yes indeed, mothers are caring creatures. Sometimes i we not always show them our love by telling them how special they are to us, thinking they already knew, but sometimes this little four letter words are so important to them because they made us who we are, give all that they can, and still thinking what if they could give more.
A beautiful praise to mothers! Your words were so genuine and heartfelt which provided such a warmth and comfortable vibe to this poem. I could just feel myself nodding after every line because it was all so true! You crafted a mother's day poem with great creativity that didn't feel cliched one bit.
"she is the bearer of pain but never succumbs to it"
^Hard to pick a favorite line from the piece, but this one stuck out to me the most. First of all, I love the use of "succumb" in a poem. The truth here was out of bounds. A mother's strength can never be measured.
I really enjoyed this poem, it just seeped beauty.
This is a lovely tribute to all mothers. I loved how you used the word 'goddess'. It just perfected everything. Mothers reward is not within our reach. Only God can reward their inestimable value. Their time, love, care, concern, pains, worries, fears and absolute commitment to us, is just divinely made. We should try our best to please them and put smiles on their face. Wipe their hidden tears and miseries. Whatever we do lets always be cradled in their glorious blessings, which we need for our own betterment.
Mothers are 'priceless' as you said. They're gems and jewels, always shooting a glimmer of happiness, love and hope in us. So this is a lovely reminder to all of us about our Mothers. A very richly portrayed piece, proud of this.
I really loved it! :-) ..