Comments : Salacity

  • 6 years ago

    by nourayasmine

    'Come hither, as I showcase

    the markings of an illusion,'

    This and the stargazer bit are omg.

    You are awesome!

  • 6 years ago

    by Tara Kay

    Andrea, I loved this...nothing else to say...

    You are amazing!!

  • 6 years ago

    by Ms Happiness

    I love the metaphor here:)

    I love the poem, and I enjoyed reading it:)

  • 6 years ago

    by Lioness

    Simply beautiful. Loved it!!!

    I loved the images of the lips and tears. There was a hint of sensual feelings in this poem and I think it's from the words you've chosen to write with.



  • 6 years ago

    by Thomas

    Very nice poem!

    Keep on writing ;)