I KNEW THAT THERE'S GONNA BE A NEW AWESOME POEM BY YOU:) lol

I really can feel the strong love you hold in this poem, great job:)

Oh my, I have read the words of the second stanza already 5 times. The whole poem is such a joy to read.

Such a celebration of love.

SPEECHLESS!!! * mouth wide open at my desk!*

Im sitting at work taking a sneaky peaky at PnQ every now and then and i came across this.........OMG syrup!! this is one of my favorite writes from you, YOU ROCK!!, the words just flow like the energy that surrounds us all....lines just move with each other in perfect harmony.....i love it ....just perfect :-)

Oh hun!

This is beautiful.

I love the title, a poem forever. When I read the poem itself I can understand why you've given it that title. The idea that your husband brings out this poem in you, and because your love for him is forever and his love for you is forever the poem within is forever too.

Awesome write! LOVED IT!!!

x

This is a very sweet poem :) I can feel the love coming off of it in waves as I read it, and that is usually hard to do for me :) However, I do have a problem with one stanza. It may just be me, but the second stanza does not quite make sense to me when I read it. I don't know if it is because of the way I am reading it...it might be. The rest is perfect though.

"I coiled my soul in the depths of madness,
walked upon sharpened blades of glass."

^ When I read this, it sounds like you are talking about before you met the person whom the poem is about. It almost seems like you were in pain - alone, frightened and you probably didn't want to be that way :)

You then meet the person and your whole world changes :) It is a really beautiful poem. I hope that you have read this to him already, or maybe read it to him someday because he deserves to know how you feel :D

Excellent
5/5

Such warmth love does bring and within us it
sings like a song. A heart warming, loving and passionate write..really enjoyed this read :)

It seems you are so content with your partner that the certainty of forever cannot/ will not be questioned. That is a beautiful thing in itself.

Nice poem. 5/5

Also,
Love the title.. Very fitting for this poem. (:

When I read the poem , I thought about your husband, this is a sweet poem. Let love live forever on thine lives and hearts.

This is actually amazing (: