Crystal Death

by Jazmyne   Jun 14, 2012


Just one hit
And that's it; your mine
I make you forget those you love
Because I'm all you need
I let you think you're in control
But I will take over; slowly
I teach you to lie, steal, and cheat
I'll will rot you from within and not even care
I live all around you and
I'm very easy to get too
I'm the thing that makes angels scream
And the devil himself sings
We will be close friends; I will control
Your mind, heart, and soul
I'm that voice in your head telling you "take me, use me"
Don't curse my name, you came to me
KNOW I AM DEALTH you will love me in the end?
When I take you life

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  • 5 years ago

    by Purple Rose

    Typos: I believe that the second to last line is kind of messed up. I don't know what happened, but it doesn't quite make sense to me...but it is your poem, just trying to help :]

    Very good poem. It sounds like you are talking about a drug of some sort...meth maybe? You described whatever it was in such a way that made it sound like meth to me...

    Very strong poem. I can tell that you have a strong aversion to it.

    Excellent
    5/5

    • 4 years ago

      by Jazmyne

      Thank u and yes its about Meth.... thank for the tip

  • 5 years ago

    by Jawwad Zafar

    Excellent poem 5/5 :)

    • 4 years ago

      by Jazmyne

      Thank u very much