Nice rhyming! Enjoyed reading.

Beautifully written. The flow is just amazing as you go through. The imagery is amazing as well. But it is incredibly sad too... :(

Great pace to this, flows very nicely, It almost gets sadder as you read on.
Its a great depression poem, depicts the mind of somebody battling their own demons.
I like the last line the best.

As an alternative meaning to the last line it could be read as somebody who doesn't want to be pure. Snow is seen as a pure substance nice clean and crisp and sparkling white. To want to dangle above suggest you are not sure you fully want to tread this path.

Just what I get from this, I may be wrong.

Nice write and good rhyming.

I love the set up for the poems. You end the poem very strong:

"Someday soon enough
I would have you know
That the high branch will bow
And my feet will dangle above the snow"

I love these lines. keep it up.