Beautifully written. The flow is just amazing as you go through. The imagery is amazing as well. But it is incredibly sad too... :(
5 years ago
Great pace to this, flows very nicely, It almost gets sadder as you read on.
Its a great depression poem, depicts the mind of somebody battling their own demons.
I like the last line the best.
As an alternative meaning to the last line it could be read as somebody who doesn't want to be pure. Snow is seen as a pure substance nice clean and crisp and sparkling white. To want to dangle above suggest you are not sure you fully want to tread this path.