Comments : Dewdrops (Naani).

  • 11 years ago

    by Ingrid

    Ik like this, Steven and would have liked it even more if you changed "each morning" by : "by morning"

    Now you repeat the word "each" two times and that is a lot in such a short verse.

    Love the message, though and the poem too, the Naani is a cute little format.

    Well done,

    5/5 Ingrid

  • 11 years ago

    by Lady Nik

    Beautiful. One day I will work up the courage to try one of these forms. One day. Thanks for sharing. -Nik

  • 11 years ago

    by Meena Krish

    Yes the morning dew drops gives the world a fresh outlook, like a new beginning..liked this :)