Andrea, this is awesome, so beautiful and romantic, so sweet, awww...
this is making me cry with the beauty of it, it is just soo lovely to read.
I love the way it was worded, and the line about still feeling the wedding ring being put on your finger, that is just beautiful
5 years ago
by Wild flower
Awwwwwww thats an awesome piece, I agree with Tara Kay its really romantic.
Happy Anniversary to you two:)
5 years ago
I've read this now maybe 5 times and everytime I do I just think how very beautiful it is...the memory of your special day is obviously still so vivid in your mind and to write a poem to commemorate it two years on is just lovely so...I'm reluctant to point out a little thing I thing are errors...do you mind?
I can still feel you
sliding the ring
upon my wanted finger,
as the sun shined brightly
and the velvet petunias
sang within my hand
I thing it should be wanting finger and it should be the sun shone brightly..
Do you know something, I added this to my favourite's before I commented ot rated this. This poem really touched me, very deeply touched me and brought a lot of emotion for me and tears into my eyes.
I know exactly the feeling you are writing about here and I have experienced this. I think you have wrote such a lovely poem about a very special love, a unique love which only happens once in a blue moon but it lasts forever.
I am so happy for you that you have found this and I can feel your emotions and heart went into this poem. It was beautiful and I thank you for sharing this.
I don't know why I haven't commented on this until now. But this piece really made me speechless. It's beautiful - filled with genuine love and happiness. I don't usually find poems like this on this site, and I'm so glad you shared this with us. May God bless you two with more years.
Again, happy anniversary. Keep writing!