Comments : Forever, 7-25-10

  • 5 years ago

    by Tara Kay

    Andrea, this is awesome, so beautiful and romantic, so sweet, awww...

    this is making me cry with the beauty of it, it is just soo lovely to read.

    I love the way it was worded, and the line about still feeling the wedding ring being put on your finger, that is just beautiful

    much love,
    xxx

  • 5 years ago

    by Wild flower

    Awwwwwww thats an awesome piece, I agree with Tara Kay its really romantic.
    Happy Anniversary to you two:)

  • 5 years ago

    by Hellon

    I've read this now maybe 5 times and everytime I do I just think how very beautiful it is...the memory of your special day is obviously still so vivid in your mind and to write a poem to commemorate it two years on is just lovely so...I'm reluctant to point out a little thing I thing are errors...do you mind?

    I can still feel you
    sliding the ring
    upon my wanted finger,
    as the sun shined brightly
    and the velvet petunias
    sang within my hand

    I thing it should be wanting finger and it should be the sun shone brightly..

    It's beautiful Andrea...

  • 5 years ago

    by Chelsey

    Happy anniversary again. This is beautiful <3 what a sweet dedication, im so happy you are happy.

  • 5 years ago

    by Hannah Lizette

    This is beautiful, Andrea. So romantic and just filled my heart with love and happiness. <3

    Happy Anniversary!!!!

  • 5 years ago

    by Decayed

    Forever, sweet love,
    with James you'll be; together,
    you deserve the best!

    ^ Hands you this haiku ^

    <3 <3

    Beautiful, Andrea

  • 5 years ago

    by L

    Happy anniversary once again!

    I can still feel you
    sliding the ring
    upon my wanting finger,
    as the sun shone brightly
    and the velvet petunias
    sang within my hand.

    This stanza feels so vivid, I could picture you both smiling as well as a small scenario with the details given.

  • 5 years ago

    by Jenni

    This poem is soooo beautiful and shows the love you have for him perfectly!! I am so happy for you two :)

  • 5 years ago

    by Baby Rainbow

    :'(

    Do you know something, I added this to my favourite's before I commented ot rated this. This poem really touched me, very deeply touched me and brought a lot of emotion for me and tears into my eyes.

    I know exactly the feeling you are writing about here and I have experienced this. I think you have wrote such a lovely poem about a very special love, a unique love which only happens once in a blue moon but it lasts forever.

    I am so happy for you that you have found this and I can feel your emotions and heart went into this poem. It was beautiful and I thank you for sharing this.

  • 5 years ago

    by A lonely soul

    Beautiful dedication and composition. All the best to you both on your anniversary.

  • 5 years ago

    by Xanthe

    I don't know why I haven't commented on this until now. But this piece really made me speechless. It's beautiful - filled with genuine love and happiness. I don't usually find poems like this on this site, and I'm so glad you shared this with us. May God bless you two with more years.
    Again, happy anniversary. Keep writing!

  • 5 years ago

    by Lioness

    It is beautiful. It brings back memories of my wedding day.

    Happy Anniversary to the both of you

    Lots of love

    x