I love this poem. i understand how you have to let go of things sometimes, and its not easy. good job.

Ugh!! Woman are dumb to let you goooooo. You're a keeper [from what I have seen and all] :)

But, I like the metaphor of your insides being a house. It shows that you've built walls around your heart to keep out pain and all. Then you open a window to let someone's light in then BAM, storming like crazy. And then it gets destructive. I like it.... I mean, it's good. Real good.