Omgoshhhh Saffie I loved this! Loved the title of course!! Throw in some commas after the long sentences :) Other than that, girl I loved the imager in this piece, I loved what you were trying to say, I love that I felt "free" with you when reading this :)
I was a Kite Runner too and it is one of the best clubs here. Your poem does justice to it and at the same time it talks about freedom and the beauty of running a kite. When I was a little girl I loved flying kites.I looked up and that kite gave a sense of identity.I knew I would be free some day.Awesome piece.Great work!