Comments : Vows In Heaven

  • 5 years ago

    by The Poet Behind The Poems

    Breathtaking,

    This piece was written with so much love and emotion I felt it pass through me

    Everything you could of said in this poem you did
    I think that it gives people who have lost somone hope

    5/5 and a nomination

    Outstanding

  • 5 years ago

    by Khalid

    Saffie I fell down the chair! What an amazing stunning breathe taking poem! I'll all-time speechless if this is your penning which really emulates legendary poems. You're a unique poet Saffie.

  • 5 years ago

    by Xanthe

    Isle -- aisle
    alter -- altar

    "The moment I have waited for"
    ^
    I have / I've been waiting for

    "Your eyes(;) exactly as I remember,"
    remembered

    "Upon instruction the rings are placed
    our fingers intertwined once again."
    ^
    semi-colon and a comma would help.

    "Hearts reunited, departed lips rejoin"
    ^
    rejoined

    blissfullness -- blissfulness

    ----

    This broke my heart though I know it's meant to be happy; you're happy and you know he is happy.
    It's really touching.

    One more suggestion though lol:
    I wouldn't write that this was a "dream" in the end. It might be better to let the reader think. I'm not sure. Just a thought. Thanks for sharing this. I enjoyed reading it though I'm not a fan of love poems. Keep writing,

  • 5 years ago

    by Dagmar Wilson

    This is one breathtaking love poem.
    From what I gather the soulmate has went
    on to a better place watching over you
    making sure that you are safe and sound.
    written with so much emotion

  • 5 years ago

    by Whiskurz

    Truly a Beautifully penned piece.......Whisk

  • 5 years ago

    by Naughtymouse

    Just simply amazing!

    This is a mammoth write, i mean not o ly the length of the piece but the emotion contained in it is nothing short of inspiring, seriously saffie my favourite write from you, your word choice and flow were impeccable throughout, the imagery that is conjured up as i read just blew my mind away, i have honestly not the vocabulary or poetic prowess to tell you how much i love this write.

    AMAZING!

  • 5 years ago

    by Wafaa

    This is so touching :') i'm a love poems maniac and this really made me feel happy and sad at the same time!
    great work!

  • 5 years ago

    by Marvellous

    What matters to one, he keeps close.

  • 5 years ago

    by NobodyKnowsItButMe

    Mind blowing job!
    The flow (content) of the poem:"winter, summer, winter and ends in spring!"
    Hope you understand what I mean to say!
    5/5

  • 4 years ago

    by Edward Oropeza

    I am speechless with this piece, can't relate if it could be viewed by paranoid eye, this seems to be a tragic love, but being optimistic, there's an undying hope, a continuity of a journey till finally the answer to a prayer is granted, even more superb and extra-ordinary, a heavenly wedding. Well done.