Back to writing with a bang! Hmm.

I love you.

:)

Wow I would be lying if I said this didn't inspire the living hell out of me
The way you paved the ideas and the descriptive words you used left me wanting to read more
This is absolutely worthy of praise
5/5

This poem is so in need of attention. More need to read this...
Absolutely incredible.. Sad, heart touching, a poem that can truly touch heart and leave us all crying in our seats.
Amazing use of metaphors. Loved the break down into parts. Everything about this was so worth a win to me!!!

Congrats!!

This piece is nothing short of incredible. I haven't read a brilliant poem in a very long time and this tips the scale. I enjoyed the imaginary and you penned this amazingly well using fantastic descriptions and metaphores. A truly phenomenal write.

Danika.

Wow, I'm speechless, this poem is so touching.

First, I love how you started this out with a quote, and how the poem was structured in three parts. The way you organized it made it more smooth and easy to read. I enjoyed that.

I really like the simplicity in your writing, and how you are still able to show deep emotions through your words.

The part with all the quotes by families made my eyes water. I could imagine people really asking those questions, wondering about their children/brother/sister etc who have been killed. It's so tragic :(

I like the repetition of "they were in boxes" .. it emphasized how they are gone, and there's nothing that can be done about it...

Really powerful poem... Great job with this, it's so sad though :(

This is Phenomenal, sad, humble, deep, awe inspiring. That is all I can say.

Gosh, you leave me breathless with this piece, though it's political (which isn't a surprising topic coming from you), nonetheless the descriptive words that you used really paints the painful picture unfolding each scene in stanzas. A powerful write with a message to send across.
Excellent write my friend and congrats on the win:)