WHAT...did this come up regarding the Practice metaphors thread ? i did not find it there...but using "air" and "heavy" made me suspect... if so...you wanna kill me ?

this is so creative lol....
you can't be that good.
It's not allowed !

amazing poem, very deep, very well written and really coherent.

being attracted to that person by her perfume, the way you metaphorized that is awesome.

the 2nd two lines, just awesome and indeed shows how the person makes you feel! I reallly think this was about the topic I've tossed, but it's nailed more than I expected....if not I apologize. just wonderful larry

This is so elegant Sir Larry, its just breathtaking!

I have to admit that the title just wowed me and I was so intrigued ro see what this poem is all about.

Simply amazing.

xxx

Sir larry.. ? why are you all other daughter so jealous of me, for your information you and Noura plagiarized THAT, I was the 1st to call him so :( but I was joking, he's my buddy :P

Ohh sorry Ms Nana, I never knew that was a copyright! lol

Plus, I never read that from you. I called him that the first time I pmed him.

Haahah larry i dont like calling you that it was a couple of times :p

lol meme Im only joking

Hahaha, tis cool hon. Was being sarcastic all the way :P

What a beautiful short poem :)

First, I love the title, it attracted my eye. I love how you started this poem, I could really feel everything you wrote.. and I remember smelling someone's perfume in the air and how strong it is. I like how the perfume pulls you to this person. I had to look up the word nascent, and I absolutely loved the meaning. This poem was almost like "love at first scent or smell" lol, and I like that.. love at first sight is too cliche, so this was a nice idea.

Really enjoyed this! Great job :)