Unveiled

by Watercolourz   Oct 10, 2012


The story of a little cut,
For when this feeling's in your gut,

A cut brazing my back,
My blood turns to ivory black,

Another cut to pierce my heart,
Another drip of cold coal black,

Another cut to change the colors,
Another jet black drop to join the others,

Another cut to slice my soul,
Another drop of something foul,

Another cut to bruise the sea,
Another desperate pain to fill me,

Another cut across my chest,
Another veil for my crest,

Another cut against my thighs,
Another way to dull the nights,

Another cut to mark my eyes,
Another way to break my ties,

Another cut to feel alive,
Another day to hide from life,

Another cut to stop the feeling,
Another minute till I'm kneeling,

Another cut to shut it out,
A final thought and I blackout.

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  • 3 years ago

    by Purvi Gadia

    What an amazing crazy idea.This poem was really deep.It did cut deep in my heart.
    All the lines are just fantastic and I love how you start almost each line with another.It adds a lot of________(I dont know what to say) something good in the poem.The word another tells us that we need to pay attention to this another.
    Overall very crazily well written.
    5/5

  • 5 years ago

    by Janis

    Damn this wasn`t beautiful as you said, it was freaking fabulous! Loved this one as insane and dark as it were it were, so real and powerful, yet just so amazing. Great job something one can really feel while reading and perfect ending ^^.

    • 5 years ago

      by Watercolourz

      Thank you mate. This was a crazy idea that came up out of nowhere and a chance to experiment with the 2x2 setup.

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