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I love this piece dear!! Omgosh the beauty in the imagery is just profound..howeverfragile arts of nature are born
^ has 8 syllables and it should have 7 ..Think of some rewording that wouldnt take away the stunningness of this...
Perhaps: nature births us fragile art.
Aside from that, this is an excellent nature piece :)
by Meena Krish
Casting frigid winds,
where white blankets cover land,
^^A nice opening for the reader to see a winter scene and feel the biting wind..very nice!
-A kiss of winter-
^^I like this line. Just imagine the land to be kissed by winter..cool kiss..liked this!
fragile arts of nature born
breathed by winters cold embrace.
^^The closing draws a nice picture where one sits and watch the once green beauty been "embraced" by a cold cold embrace.
Enjoyed the read :)